Shayne McClendon

I found this book rather boring and repetative. I found it difficult to reconcile the actions, attitude, experience, knowledge and wisdom of the main character with the 18 year old she was supposed to be. She may have had to grow up early, but it did not ring true to me at all. Each chapter is essentially another tale of lust with little character development. Towards the back end of the book the author does try to add some, but it came a little too late in the story. I suppose there are only so many ways you can describe sex without cliche, and this book is no exception. I felt like the different characters the call girl had sex with seemed to have very similar dialogue during sex, but then again, maybe everyone in America screams "tear that pussy up!" So, as I say, i found the book rather boring and seemed to skim over some parts looking for something in the story line apart from sex. If i just wanted to read porn, I would have picked up a mag. To me, an erotic novel has to be more than the sum of its parts, and the sex must hold more meaning than simply words on a page. It felt mechanical and sometimes physically impossible, but if all you are after is descriptions of sex then i suppose this book delivers.… (altro)