Jeannie Watt
Autore di The Christmas Secret
Serie
Opere di Jeannie Watt
The Cowboy's Christmas 6 copie
Her Cowboy Christmas Hero 2 copie
A Sweet Montana Christmas: A Clean and Uplifting Romance (The Cowgirls of Larkspur Valley Book 2) (2023) 2 copie
Montana Country Legacy: Big Sky Dreams: Made for the Rancher / Her Cowboy Boss / Her Montana Cowboy (2022) — Autore — 2 copie
Jeannie Watt — Autore — 1 copia
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- female
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Statistiche
- Opere
- 60
- Utenti
- 467
- Popolarità
- #52,672
- Voto
- 3.8
- Recensioni
- 25
- ISBN
- 146
- Lingue
- 1
The second dislike is, despite being shorter, there is too much repetition. Of eye color. Of the past hurts. Of the wedding date. Of the dad-son conflict. More. Any good editor will notice these, and any good writer will work to edit them out. Readers aren't stupid, and the shorter the work, the less we rely on memory anyway. It was feeling like filler to meet a word count. Insulting.
The third dislike nearly made me stop reading. (Now I know I wouldn't have missed much. At the time it looked like I had a lot of story left...) The one sex scene is minimal - they go from distant to sex in a very short time, not terrible since they'd known each other before. But then after-sex is waaay too casual for the amount of angst still to be resolved. It felt like the scene was lifted whole from something else and not transitioned very well.
I won't read this author again.
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