Lana Prada

This is an intriguing retelling of the Exodus from the Egyptian point of view. The events of the book appear to be very well-researched.

The story does suffer a little from the obvious effects of being written by someone whose first language is not English—misused tenses, missing articles, misused adverbs, etc.—and would benefit from better editing. In addition, I would have placed the maps at the beginning rather than the end.