Jesse Lorenzo
Autore di Forever Marked (Marked Series, #1)
Opere di Jesse Lorenzo
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- Opere
- 5
- Utenti
- 6
- Popolarità
- #1,227,255
- Voto
- 4.2
- Recensioni
- 1
- ISBN
- 1
My biggest struggle with this Forever Marked was the writing. It was overly verbose at times and had me rolling my eyes frequently! For example:
I get it-he tells the story well. Did I need that entire 3 sentences to understand that? No. I would have rather had it incorporated into the actual story. This book did a lot more 'telling' and not showing the reading. Here is another example:
Another issue I had was the overuse of exclamation points. Seriously, they were at the end of every other sentence. I found it to be distracting overall from the actual story. That is not something I want while reading!
Finally, since the book takes place in Scotland, most of the characters have Scottish accents. It got a bit difficult to read at times. I found this really seemed to slow down my reading. Again, that is not something I want when reading!
So, why 3.5 stars for Forever Marked? The plot really was good! Maybe you won't be as put off by the language issues I mentioned! Even with my irritation over those few things, the plot held my attention enough to want to keep reading!
POV: 3rd person (not my favorite and might be another reason I struggled)
Cliffhanger: sort of (you are given a bit to whet your appetite for book 2)
Trope: Damsel in Distress
Tears: No… (altro)