Adam Heine

Anyone who doesn't speak Japanese will have a hard time reading this book. It sounds as if was written by a weeaboo. Various places are filled in with Japanese words for no reason and are not explained. The author doesn't seem to know too much about Japan either. Calling everything a 'kimono' when it's usually referred to by a more specific name, such as a yukata. He also uses X-sama which is fine, however it becomes sensei X which... It should be X-sensei. There's also Itaru calling Kano "daughter" all the time. Which, as a father he's call her Kano-chan or something, not 'musume' over and over. There's also one 'to-san' that slipped by as those were all translated as 'father' which makes it sound clunky.

The story over all is really nothing special. Evil female AI that may or may not have in in for the humans. Itaru has to save the day. Lots of word "shame' and "honor" being dropped all over the place.… (altro)