Victoria Glad

This may be the worst written vampire story I've ever read.
Full of inconsistencies, leaps to conclusion, out-of the blue reactions and generally things that don’t make sense.
You’d think it would be easier to retain consistency in a story that’s less than 20 pages long.

Mid-point the narrator, who reminisces the already concluded story, wonders how come the two lovers managed to die side by side, when he already knows the answer. So many things in the story don’t make sense that it’s mind-boggling to even try to argue about them.
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