Jayne Castel

I was enjoying this up until the end. The 3rd act breakup made total sense. At first it bothered me that Justin never thought to free her until he wanted her to choose to marry him (and stupidly thought she would stay), so I'm glad Fenella left and Aedan talked some sense into him. I just don't understand why the author wrote that she went straight back to her terrible family and ex-lover just to show us how much better she could have it with Justin. Her moment of realization of her love was just abrupt and dumb, and I didn't resonate with it. I'd have preferred to read Justin make the bigger sacrifice and leave his role with Rome.… (altro)