Leah Brooke

This one missed the mark for me. The bdsm element was weak. He was all 'I am so intense that I will scare her with the darkness of my desires', but in reality there was some spanking and it was all during sex play and some anal stuff. This was all written pretty much in a manner that made it seem very vanilla. The word choices the author used made it seem as if none of the things that the hero did to the heroine challenged her at all. He never pushed her into any sort of 'sub space.' In fact some of the things that he did were written as if they didn't hurt her at all but merely gave her a happy little buzz when I think that even at this vanilla level they would have hurt more than that. But she never even shed the smallest tear. The hero didn't want to hurt her at all either physically or mentally. So that was not very believable. And that was before she can slightly injured in a hit and run and then he wouldn't do anything but slow missionary position. She was just okay. I kept wincing when she talked during sex. Everything she said was either childish, stupid or just embarrassing. I might try one of the menage stories but I'm not sure that Desire Oklahoma is the place for me.… (altro)