Sam BaroneRecensioni
Autore di L' assedio di Orak
Recensioni
Una confrontación entre dos formas de vida
Durante incontables generaciones, hordas de belicosos nómadas dominaron las llanuras de Mesopotamia, matando y esclavizando a comunidades enteras de agricultores cuyo pacífico modo de vida despreciaban. Esta es la crónica de cómo la próspera villa de Orak consiguió plantar cara a sus temibles enemigos y defenderse de una vez y para siempre.
Un salvador inesperado
El hombre que logró que el fuego de la resistencia prendiera en el espíritu de sus habitantes fue Eskkar, un guerrero con una cuenta pendiente con los temibles bárbaros. Gracias a su elocuencia y su astucia, resolvieron emprender algo revolucionario: un gran muro que les protegiera de los ataques de los jinetes.
Una historia épica en el alba de la civilización
Para llevar adelante su tarea, Eskkar contó con la ayuda de Trella, una joven e inteligente esclava, quien intuía que su destino estaba ligado al de su amo y que ambos estaban llamados a emprender una hazaña más perdurable que la de la defensa de la ciudad.
Tras liderar a una hueste que se enfrentó a los bárbaros para distraerlos mientras se terminaba la muralla, la popularidad de Eskkar entre sus conciudadanos aumentó hasta el punto de suscitar envidias entre los miembros de las familias más poderosas de la ciudad. A partir de cierto momento, Eskkar y Trella tuvieron que hacer frente no sólo a los enemigos que les asediaban en el exterior, sino también a los que intrigaban en su propio bando.
El esfuerzo y el ingenio combinados de Eskkar y Trella estarán en el origen de una de las poderosas dinastías que convirtieron la cuenca del Tigris en la cuna de la civilización.
With all this said, the author did do a good job of explaining how Orak's defense was established at a time when towns were virtually undefended. Almost the entire book is devoted to building the town's defense, but I found that part interesting. He also did well with the battle scenes. There were three battles in the book, and they rivaled the ones in Bernard Cornwell, Conn Iggulden, and Jack Whyte.
From the start, it's blindingly obvious what's going to happen here, who is going to emerge triumphant, so nothing I say below will 'spoil' it for anyone.
I had no idea this was the third of a series 'The Eskkar Saga', when I started it. But it feels like he thought he would write a trilogy before he started. Then thought of an idea. That might have made a short story. Then had to pad it out. And pad out the padding. Length doesn't necessarily give depth, as this proves. It's only creating the feeling of "Yes, yes. Get on with it!"
It is set around Summeria, some 3,500-odd years ago, concentrating on the conflict between the cities of Summeria and Akkad. Akkad? No, me neither. The main character is Eskkar, the 'King' of Akkad, his cartoon wife who handles the spying and the treachery and is beautiful and all the other cliches you can think of. And the equally cartoon-like "boo, hiss! Oh my goodness, they're brother and sister, eww!" leaders of Summeria. So you can guess whose side we're on here.
And at that distance, with all but surely the most serious of scholars having absolutely no idea of what went on then, it might as well be science fiction about life on another planet. Ok, the rivers Euphrates and Tigris might well ring a bell with some, but not a lot more will as this is set before what most people know of as Greek, Roman or many other historical periods. However, he doesn't even use this to perhaps suggest that here is the beginnings of modern civilisation and here is from where and how the ideas that became modern civilisation developed. Right at the in very end, outside the story, in the afterword, there is a little about the tactics used in the final battle not being so outrageous, given that Alexander used, to similar effect, similar, even more outrageous, tactics later on in history. But this is the only attempt to put the events in any kind of context and it is after the story is finished. Otherwise, even given the fact that it is a thousand years or more (I have no idea of dates for the Greek and Roman periods) before the Greeks and Romans were anywhere near their peak - these are very cultured, very sophisticated, very efficient, very modern and mature military societies. Doesn't fully ring true, though I have very little idea of what level Summerian culture was at at this point, I would have thought that as it is represented here, is a little over ambitious, shall we say.
And saying it is set in and around Summeria, is also a little misleading. As it actually is about competing cities to the north of Summeria. And Summeria is the hated, overbearing enemy here. Odd.
The main body of the book, and it takes a very long time, going into totally - for the sake of a good story - unnecessary length - is more or less the build up to the final battle. Nothing that could have been skipped over, written more concisely and still had the desired effect, or left out entirely. Training, spying, trying to create tension is fine, but length dilutes its effect. I'm sure that a more casual reader will either give up before half way, or just skip through to the last section. And not miss anything.
As i say, the final, epic, battle is worth the price of entry on its own. Clear, precise, tense and very well done indeed. It almost makes up for having to wade through a lot of nonsense to get there. Though, the book really should have ended there, have let us imagine what might have happened in the period afterwards - I thought it would be that the Akkadians became the civilisation we know now as the Summerians, but he doesn't say. He goes on a bit longer, tidying up, as though our imaginations aren't up to it. Diluting the effect of the battle.
I can only rate it as mildly interesting, though I'm going to give it three stars. The battle on its own, is excellently done and should be worth four, but all the preceding guff drags it back to a three. The good bits aren't long enough and the long bits aren't good enough. It's clear he set about wanting to write an epic. And writing endlessly about nothing in particular was how he thought it should be done.
The first book dealt with how they decided to built walls around their city, stand their ground and fight off the barbarian horde that attacked them. This book deals with Eskkar’s desire to spread his territory to other villages and farms, but while he is away expanding his kingdom, his wife must deal with a new kind of invader. Korthac, an Egyptian, realizes that the way to take control is from inside the walls. And so sets himself and his men up as jewel traders while working all the while to take over the city with plans to enslave the population and become it’s ruler.
This was a fun read, with lots of fighting and swordplay to keep the readers attention. Is it history? Probably not, more speculative than accurate, but nevertheless, a good action story, with strong characters and plenty of excitement.
The author paints a vivid scene of despair and hopelessness, with the 'dirt-eaters' (the early farmers of bronze age mesopotamia) who live in rudimentary settlements, accepting their role as sword-fodder for the warbands who still roam the country hunting for food and pillaging for treasure.
I felt engaged really quickly with the protagonist, Eskkar, as he struggled against his own demons and against the stubborn townsfolk who resisted his pleas to make a stand against the raiders. But Eskkar is not alone, he has a slave girl, Trella, who is as cunning and calm as Eskkar is bold and aggressive. The pair dovetail really nicely without ever coming across as infallible.
The story builds neatly, taking you on the adventure and builds towards a hectic and unforgettable ending.
A must for hist fic fans.
From this setting, the book tells three intertwining stories of building the first walls and defenses around the town later known as Akkad, the love growing between Eskkar and his newly acquired slave and also his social advancement.
At parts the story is a bit naive and predictable and frankly, I'm not sure I like the fact that the main characters are inventing just about everything invented in this historical era (which reminds me strongly of Jean Auel). However, at times the historical background - and for some reason especially building the walls - were able to capture my attention, and as a whole, the book was fairly entertaining. I think there will be a sequel, so I guess I'll have to look out for that.
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Sam Barone
Publicado: 2007 | 470 páginas
Novela Histórico
Serie: Eskkar #2 /sEyIx581F_G4
Entre el Tigris y el Éufrates se encuentran los territorios más deseados por los bárbaros, entre ellos la ahora pacífica ciudad de Akkad. Han pasado ya seis semanas desde que los bárbaros de Alur Meriki fueran derrotados a las afueras de la nueva muralla de Orak, y la ciudad ha sido rebautizada como Akkad. Eskkar y Trella son ahora sus gobernantes, aunque las dificultades aparecen casi por sí solas. Después de que acabara el desesperado y escalofriante asedio, todo el mundo pensaba que la paz y la prosperidad volverían pronto. Pero las viejas costumbres tardan en desaparecer, y además nuevos problemas plagan la ciudad y a sus nuevos dirigentes. Fuera de los muros el campo sigue siendo asolado por bandidos, la comida escasea y el comercio es prácticamente inexistente. Es por ello que mientras Trella se queda reinando en la ciudad, Eskkar tiene que adentrarse en el campo para organizar su pacificación. Es la oportunidad perfecta para Korthac, líder egipcio, de hacerse con la ciudad más grande entre el Tigris y el Éufrates. Para ello cuenta con un grupo de soldados bien entrenados y leales, que intentarán ayudarle en la batalle definitiva por el poder del estratégico lugar.