I was drawn in by all the teasers and the blurb for this story. I had not read the story by K Bromberg that this was loosely written about so it came as a complete surprise. The premise of the story was good and I was genuinely surprised because this was the first time reading this author.

The story starts out pretty intense for Liv. My heart hurt for her. I wasn't sure where it was going to go from there but liked the direction that it took. I enjoyed Topher and Liv together. I did, however, have some issues in the story. I was surprised that after not showing much interest in Topher that things changed quickly. I also was surprised by part II and how things turned out for them. It didn't make much sense. I also didn't understand what Joe was doing in that part of the story. It felt like he was instigating something and then that never really went anywhere. Also, the ending about the dad and the person calling about the dad was just odd to me. That is just my opinion.

Even with those parts, there were some steamy good times, a great secondary character with the "mom", and for the most part a plausible storyline. I would have liked things fleshed out more in several places. but it did keep my interest and kept me turning the pages to find out how it would all work out. ( )