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 Iscriviti per consentire a LibraryThing di scoprire se ti piacerà questo libro. Attualmente non vi sono conversazioni su questo libro. 1   wildwily | May 28, 2020 |   It is not necessary to call the alien and alien every time it is mentioned. As a matter of fact, simply describing it is likely sufficient for readers to identify its alien-ness. Capitalizing ‘Barbarians’ does little to describe or contextualize raiders. A medical robot does not ‘prevent’ injury. Basically, the writing is a touch pedantic. And the early chapters force feed background information almost without context. There were some interesting concepts and the writing was ‘clean’ (few to no proofreading errors). It didn’t flow and establish a narrative, however. Seriously needs a content editing pass or two. (  ) wildwily | May 28, 2020 | nessuna recensione | aggiungi una recensione
Vivian Bond has a secret that could bring down the Milky Way. Special Commander Jake Trace doesn't care - he hates her. When Jake meets the irritating Vivian at a gallery, and she steals a painting he's been tasked to secure for his superiors, he locks onto her like a hunter to prey. It's the only thing that saves her life. For Vivian Bond has enemies. Everywhere. She has a twisted destiny she's run from her whole life. Now it will catch up. Vivian and Jake are thrown together in a fight for the Milky Way and beyond as an ancient power rises once more. The Eye of the Gods is a five-part action-adventure space opera sure to please fans of Odette C. Bell's Axira. Non sono state trovate descrizioni di biblioteche |
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It is not necessary to call the alien and alien every time it is mentioned. As a matter of fact, simply describing it is likely sufficient for readers to identify its alien-ness.
Capitalizing ‘Barbarians’ does little to describe or contextualize raiders.
A medical robot does not ‘prevent’ injury.
Basically, the writing is a touch pedantic. And the early chapters force feed background information almost without context. There were some interesting concepts and the writing was ‘clean’ (few to no proofreading errors). It didn’t flow and establish a narrative, however.
Seriously needs a content editing pass or two. (