So very many errors! But...
You can find well written, grammatically correct owner's manuals with perfect sentence structure but the reading is deadly dull.

May Sage is anything but dull, her stories are interesting. Her characters are engaging. If you're looking for an enjoyable plot and fun side stories with exciting twists and hot sex scenes then these books are great escapes.

However be warned, if you can't skim past all the wrong word choices, misspellings and missing or incorrect plural terms etc. then May Sage books are not for you. I am wondering how this author has so many books out without finding a decent editor but whatever.

I like how she tells a story. So 5 stars for the story and 1 star for the execution. I read really fast and just fly by all the mistakes since I know what she MEANT to say. This is the second book in the series (I read the first book, "Wordless" in a free bundle, "Broken Dreams" and I thought it was the best of the set) I still want to find out what happens to the characters and her world in the next book. ( )