Oh, I love this version so much more! And fits with the prompt perfectly. I want more too. ( )

Loved the story but it needed a good beta reader. I know it was a freebie but the editing wasn't up to the quality I expect from this author.
The end of the story implied there may be a sequel. I hope that is the case.

I am not sure why the rating is so low.

The story is short, but fun, wonderfully written and easy to read (not going to make a big deal of typos, they happen even to the best).

I think I liked the first book better, but only because I am a huge fan of fantasy and historicals.

This installment features great sportsmanship and that is always a win for me no matter times or settings. Certainly it wasn't not as dramatic, when the boys finished, but it was there :D



Loved it. 5 stars. ( )

Loved the story but it needed a good beta reader. I know it was a freebie but the editing wasn't up to the quality I expect from this author.
The end of the story implied there may be a sequel. I hope that is the case.