Shane Walker

Nice to have a book that emphasis trade and crafting stuff BUT - this MC gets it all throwing in his lap. Traits, skill, a useful player that has the ultimate weapon for the beginners dungeon and gives gold to finance the first investment and wants nothing in return.
In the next town a big merchant that throws training and wisdom and gold to him for nearly nothing. Other player working for him as crafter so he can do even more money. An economy that has no problem to take more and more of his goods without prices going down. Levels levels levels - and when he is at a level cap he gets some unexpected gain ex machina to raise the level cap again.
In the end that was simply boring.
Adding to that the dialogues feeling artificial and especially at the beginning the wording could need a good editor.
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