Loren Teese

A fun, short and very steamy read.

I never doubted the love between this couple or felt they weren't totally on board with what happens. There is the merest hint of shaming the husband, but only in the wife's thoughts, and it wasn't enough to reduce my enjoyment of the story. The build-up to sex is as slow as can be managed in a story of this length and it is clear that everyone has a great time when it happens.

I get the feeling from the way this story is written that the author may speak English as a second language, or it might have been translated to English from some other language. Some phrasing is unusual and on a couple of occasions the wrong word is chosen. It was never enough to take me out of the story though, and I mention it here so readers can be prepared going in. It is noticeable, but not a big issue.

I enjoyed this story and I'll almost certainly return for another taste of the author's work. Recommended.… (altro)