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Sloppy

Mixed tenses, missing words, endless exposition. Then there are the non-sequiturs that kept popping up - “He farted when he was nervous.” It was amusing, but the plot was not moving.
 
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wildwily | 1 altra recensione | May 28, 2020 |
Sloppy

Mixed tenses, missing words, endless exposition. Then there are the non-sequiturs that kept popping up - “He farted when he was nervous.” It was amusing, but the plot was not moving.
 
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wildwily | 1 altra recensione | May 28, 2020 |
 
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davidweigel | Nov 1, 2008 |
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