Mimi Jo Ronan

This is a short sweet story. I enjoyed it, but there were several errors (spelling, grammar, capitalization) that should have been caught. I liked the emotions as colours (synesthesia?) angle, I think that aspect could be expanded on.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily. A beautiful short read that I feel would fit perfectly amongst other works in English classrooms where students could discuss. It's not my entire vibe, but I thought the descriptions were lively and chaotic. I found myself liking the first person and the other character being 'you' throughout, it made the story come alive.