Dayna Martin
Autore di The Toddler’s Handbook
Opere di Dayna Martin
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- Opere
- 31
- Utenti
- 191
- Popolarità
- #114,255
- Voto
- 3.7
- Recensioni
- 1
- ISBN
- 92
- Lingue
- 12
That said, I have a few constructive criticisms. First and really foremost, this book NEEDS a better editor. There were quite a few spelling mistakes that caught my eye and some punctuation that needs to be cleaned up. This isn't a blog - it's a published document and needs to be professional to be taken seriously by many people. I would hate for people to disregard the important messages contained within because of poor editing.
My husband is having trouble reading this book as a result. We're both fairly well-trained writers (in terms of spelling, punctuation, editing) and it is sometimes painful to get through some of the writing. I wanted to take a red pen to it - NOT because I disagreed with the message/content, but because I wanted to it be more clearly stated, more eloquently delivered! I wanted to add semi-colons and rearrange some of the statements for better flow.
I would love to see more published by Dayna - I just hope that next time she gets more people to preview her work and offer suggestions/corrections.… (altro)