Dorothy Kliewer

There was nothing in this novel that made it stand out. The book needed to be edited just a tad more, actually, because at times it would just be over-the-top redundant (it had the same sentence repeated twice, not for emphasis but just neglective revision), but at other times the book left the reader a little bit clueless about why characters did certain things. I also felt like the pace randomly picked up at the end, as though the author was like 'blah, i've spent too much time on this book, i just want to be done, so he's the bad guy and that's the end.' to which i raspberry at.… (altro)