The Promise by Ruth Saberton is a 2019 Millington publication.

This book has not only been languishing on my Kindle for a little while but is also a Kindle Unlimited book I checked out a really long time ago- so, it was time to read it or return it. Overall, the book seemed well received and I have not read a historical fiction novel in a long time…. So here we are.

The story switches back and forth between the present and Cornwall during the second world war. After her father’s death, Nell is going through his things when she discovers a faded photograph, she knows will unlock the key to her father’s heritage. When she arrives in Cornwall, she eventually finds Estella, a woman who knew her grandfather during the war.
As Estella lies in a hospital bed facing down her final days, she finally tells her story to her neighbor, Josh and to Nell, who will finally get the elusive answers to what really happened to her grandfather, a black man accused of desertion…

This is a really good story. It is emotional and bittersweet, compelling and mysterious. Unfortunately, the pacing is just too slow and there were some issues with the writing, as well. A bit of editing would have done wonders, but as it was, I did find myself skimming here and there- feeling like it was time to get things wrapped up, especially as it was clear where the story was heading.

The author definitely has the right idea, and her story is absolutely one worth investing in- but it does require patience and one will have to overlook the rough draft quality of the book. The story has real potential; it just needs some professional spit and shine work done to give it a good polish.

Although the story is worthy of at least a four-star rating, I do feel I should consider the reading experience, which was rocky at times, which unfortunately brings it down to 3 stars.

Despite some issues with the writing, I would like to give this author another chance someday. ( )