Most people probably won't notice these, but as an illustrator and graphic designer, I'm not a fan of the retouching in this one. For a few seconds I was wondering why there was a floating palm leaf in the sky. I also don't like the letterer's choice of using the same typeface for both the dialogue and sound effects translation, making it easy to confuse sound effects for dialogue.

The rating is for the story. The romance was not convincing, although to be fair most of these Harlequin manga don't contain enough pages to allow for natural flow and good character development anyway. ( )