Eh. Not bad, but a lot of unnecessary misunderstanding - because he won't admit what he is, even when they're safely away. And then he does and there's instant accord - I don't know, it just seems kind of arbitrary. And the separation at the end, and how he finds her again - author's fiat rather than flowing well from the story, is how it strikes me. Not bad - nothing impossible, and the characterization is reasonably solid - but not wonderful. ( )