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Amira Rain

Autore di Melted By The Dragon

42 opere 162 membri 8 recensioni

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Comprende il nome: Amira Rain

Serie

Opere di Amira Rain

Melted By The Dragon (2015) 18 copie
Melted By The Lion (2015) 10 copie
The Island Of Alphas (2015) 8 copie
The Island Of Bears (2015) 8 copie
Sold to the Bears (2015) 7 copie
Sold to the Alphas (2015) 6 copie
Gifted to the Wolves (2016) 5 copie
Sold to the Dragons (2015) 5 copie
Gifted to the Bear (2016) 5 copie

Etichette

Informazioni generali

Nome canonico
Rain, Amira
Sesso
female
Attività lavorative
author

Utenti

Recensioni

It was interesting but considering the title, extremely vanilla. I'd be interesting in checking out other books in the series, but I get the feeling they are going to have a very similar plot.
 
Segnalato
justgeekingby | Jun 6, 2023 |
Finished Reading July 30, 2016

Melted By The Dragon by Amira Rain is a Paranormal Romance.
It is very badly written. It starts off well then quickly deteriorates. This book is in severe need of the mighty 'Blue Pencil'.
Punctuation of conversations need correcting. The conversations themselves are also dull and repetitive. Often infantile. Overuse of the word 'Well' at the beginning of conversations. Due to improper punctuation it is difficult to know who is speaking and when a conversation is over.
A lot of mundane and unnecessary information about absolutely nothing. Over explaining information we already know and not enough action.
Sentence's that need editing (as in delete words) and better structure needed.
Paragraphs that run on and on, but don't do anything for world nor character building.
After the 1st couple of chapters it became extremely difficult to continue reading. And that is a real shame. There is a good story sitting here. But it is so bogged down in problems you just lose interest.
This book was definitely not ready for publishing.

Purchased from Amazon February 8, 2016
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bodebeabay | 1 altra recensione | Sep 25, 2022 |
 
Segnalato
izzied | 1 altra recensione | Oct 29, 2020 |
Liked the story. The writing was a bit stilted and at times disconnected. The spanking was a major annoyance, though it was short. The sex could have been less abrupt and more sexy.
 
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LadyTi | 1 altra recensione | Sep 5, 2017 |

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Statistiche

Opere
42
Utenti
162
Popolarità
#130,374
Voto
3.2
Recensioni
8
ISBN
22

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