Ainslie Paton
Autore di White Balance
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Opere di Ainslie Paton
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Statistiche
- Opere
- 29
- Utenti
- 188
- Popolarità
- #115,783
- Voto
- 3.3
- Recensioni
- 23
- ISBN
- 30
1. It was way too long. A third of the yakking could have been cut out and it would have still been a good story.
2. Despite the extreme length, the ending was a little rushed. How is this possible?
3. While it was written competently, it could have used a little more polishing up. A few misspellings and grammar boo-boos, nothing too egregious, some of the spelling bits could have been formatting issues, as it was often letters dropped from the end of words.
4. There were too many unnecessary p.o.v's and narration shifts. I couldn't always tell who I was reading. And the secondary character views didn't add anything to the story.
However, I did like a lot about the story too.
1. Scott, the gay best friend, wasn't The Gay Best Friend.
2. The friendships between the dudes seemed authentic.
3. Dan was an actual nice guy, just an occasionally misguided, drunk slut, and I bought his transformation. I definitely appreciated that his decision and desire to change wasn't initially prompted by Alex (even if she was later a factor).
4. Australia sounds awesome? As in, yes it sounds legitimately awesome, but some of the slang I didn't get. That's cool though, I used the internet.
I liked this enough to not regret having spent money on it. That doesn't sound like a ringing endorsement, but considering how often I finish a book and wish I could build a time capsule so I can get back my time and money, it's pretty high praise.… (altro)