Loren L. Coleman
Autore di Threads of Ambition
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Fonte dell'immagine: Loren L Coleman
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Opere di Loren L. Coleman
Stop Me If You've Heard This One 1 copia
Sisters of the Blade 1 copia
Drink, Drank, Drunk 1 copia
Inside Job 1 copia
Cold Dead Fingers 1 copia
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Informazioni generali
- Data di nascita
- 1968
- Sesso
- male
- Nazionalità
- USA
- Luogo di nascita
- Longview, Washington, USA
- Attività lavorative
- United States Navy
- Breve biografia
- Loren L. Coleman was a member of the United States Navy, Nuclear Field, for five years. For four years, Loren worked as a professional freelancer for game companies such as FASA Corporation and TSR. He now lives in the Pacific Northwest with his wife, two sons and a daughter.
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Jasek Kelswa-Steiner. He's so dreamy. Every woman wants him.
Meanwhile, Tara Bishop dies off the page and we return to women pining for Jasek.
Blergh.
Hard to feel sympathetic for the Inner Sphere, unless that was the point?
Meanwhile, Tara Bishop dies off the page and we return to women pining for Jasek.
Blergh.
Hard to feel sympathetic for the Inner Sphere, unless that was the point?
This author needs an English class. He can't put together sentences. The vast majority of this novel was written with sentence fragments. This made for some seriously jumpy reading.
I found this book difficult to read because of all the sentence fragments. At least one out of three sentences are fragmented throughout this novel (and the series). While I understand that the use of a sentence fragment can be effective when used sparingly, this author has written an entire trilogy comprised almost entirely of fragments!
Honestly, it makes the author look as though he has no command of the English language at all.
His Cimmerians wear ponchos, which seem wildly out of place for the culture, and the author misidentifies the Shemites as a black race. Twice in the trilogy he mentions the ebony skin of Belit - a woman Robert E. Howard described as having ivory skin.
The fragments really ruined the novel.
… (altro)
I found this book difficult to read because of all the sentence fragments. At least one out of three sentences are fragmented throughout this novel (and the series). While I understand that the use of a sentence fragment can be effective when used sparingly, this author has written an entire trilogy comprised almost entirely of fragments!
Honestly, it makes the author look as though he has no command of the English language at all.
His Cimmerians wear ponchos, which seem wildly out of place for the culture, and the author misidentifies the Shemites as a black race. Twice in the trilogy he mentions the ebony skin of Belit - a woman Robert E. Howard described as having ivory skin.
The fragments really ruined the novel.
… (altro)
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- Opere
- 62
- Opere correlate
- 15
- Utenti
- 2,352
- Popolarità
- #10,903
- Voto
- 3.3
- Recensioni
- 10
- ISBN
- 113
- Lingue
- 7
- Preferito da
- 2
Honestly, I just could not get into many of the other stories. I tried. They're just all over the place. Even Blaine Pardoe's bit about the final moments of the Fedcom Civil War... sigh. Just a disappointing collection when you consider how many pieces of sourcebook fluff work well.