Ashlen Brown

The Secret of Blackjack Woods is an unbelievable tale about Jim and his family finding something scary in the woods near their house. The characters in this short tale are one dimensional and the dialogue is over dramatic and unrealistic. Descriptions and characterizations are underdeveloped and most are told to the reader rather than shown. The ending of the story is much too easy and too pat to be relatable. The idea for the story is a good one, but the execution is poor. Overall, a very disappointing read.… (altro)

The Secret of Blackjack Woods is an unbelievable tale about Jim and his family finding something scary in the woods near their house. The characters in this short tale are one dimensional and the dialogue is over dramatic and unrealistic. Descriptions and characterizations are underdeveloped and most are told to the reader rather than shown. The ending of the story is much too easy and too pat to be relatable. The idea for the story is a good one, but the execution is poor. Overall, a very disappointing read.… (altro)