Kol Anderson

I think the sin here was how this book was written. Younger brother falling in love with his older brother has some good plot possibilities. What came out in this particular case was a very choppy story. Kayden has a decent job but nit is only mentioned once after he screwed the boss to get it. Meeting Jacob may have been a set up by Beretta but he was only mentioned once again. Kayden moving in with Jacob while Jacob still has a roommate was not explained. The whole fiasco with Ryan wound up going nowhere. The story had no flow or cohesion to it which was a shame because it could have been edited into an interesting story. I would avoid this one.… (altro)

Sorry, Kol, I am partial to young, cute and abused, so I bought it, but this book should have never left your computer without someone proofreading it first. And I don't mean a friend or a neighbor, unless of course they are qualified.

I thought I had a WTH shelf, added especially for books like this one, along with [b:Topping Timothy|6898120|Topping Timothy|Erin O'Niall|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1254520659s/6898120.jpg|7120575], [b:Mortal Enemies|8262390|Mortal Enemies|J.L. Farnsworth|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1344228204s/8262390.jpg|13079932], [b:Cake|12912548|Cake (Blood Nation, #1)|Derekica Snake|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1327905806s/12912548.jpg|12930309] or [b:Calor del Amor|6033204|Calor del Amor|K.B. Forrest|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1327981556s/6033204.jpg|6208692], but I guess not :(
Going to fix it right now.

I am not going to say anything more about the quality of the book, mostly because I don't even know where to begin, there are so many faults, and I am afraid I will never finish.

A piece of advice to readers, though:
For the love of all things dark and twisted, please, move along and go get the real stuff: [b:The Flesh Cartel #1: Capture|15986924|The Flesh Cartel #1 Capture|Rachel Haimowitz|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1346752258s/15986924.jpg|21742008], [b:Pain and . . . pain?|13391602|Pain and . . . pain?|Traxie|/assets/nocover/60x80.png|18622695] (not very well edited either, but it's a freebee!), [b:Skin Deep|17668078|Skin Deep (Skin Deep, #1)|J.M. Stone|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1366407756s/17668078.jpg|24663770], [b:The Island|17153604|The Island|Lisa Henry|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/books/1356112250s/17153604.jpg|18641851].

If you are into more of the same - abuse, rent boys, bad master-turn lover, but readable and enjoyable without characters who have er... no character - sorry, bad writing rubs off.... - PM me, I will send you a nice long list.

PS I will not be buying the next installment.

PPS Oh, did I mention setting broken bones (that are so broken, they poke through the skin) in one short home visit. True story!… (altro)