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Mark Abernethy

Autore di Golden Serpent

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Fonte dell'immagine: Allen and Unwin Media Centre

Opere di Mark Abernethy

Golden Serpent (2007) 20 copie
Second Strike (2008) 18 copie
Double Back (2009) 15 copie
Counter Attack (2011) 15 copie
The Contractor (2017) 2 copie
At Hell's Gate (2017) 2 copie
A Sound Word: Volume One (2004) 1 copia

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The plot for this novel is good however I personally found the narrative to be annoying, almost as if the author was trying too much or too hard to show the characters were Australian calling Jakarta - Jakkers, Singapore - Singers, etc. Phrases such as "showered and made up like a sales d*ckhead" seemed unnecessary to me, thrown in to bolster to 'Australian credentials'.

In light of this, during the first 200 pages the narrative and slang had it firmly in two star territory however after this many pages you start becoming immune to what was previously annoying and detracting from the story and you're able to enjoy it slightly more.

Overall, it's a solid three stars based on plot, pace & action.
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HenriMoreaux | Mar 30, 2013 |
To be frank, this book is terrible.

Where to begin... well the actual writing does very little for me, phrases such as "Mac punched the Chinaman in the nuts" really belong more in a teenagers book (if anywhere) than a 'serious' adult novel.

The last Mark Abernethy novel I read the main character checked his Casio G-Shock 64 thousand times and it was immensely detracting from the storyline I almost felt like I was reading an advertising brochure it was mentioned so much. By page 136 in this book though not once had the Casio G-Shock been raised or looked at and I thought there was a chance that despite the story being utterly boring that it might just get better, maybe. Then lo and behold on page 137 the G-Shock came out, followed by another two sightings, then is disappeared for until the last quarter of the book where it was looked at no less than 12 times. Do I really need to be told 15 times what brand of watch the character is using? I vastly prefer books which just mention it once to build the character and then say 'watch' unless some change takes place.

The last book also used annoying abbreviations such as Singers (Singapore), Honkers (Hong Kong) and Bangers (Bangkok) but just to increase the level of poor quality writing in this instalment the usage of such was mixed, so one sentence may use the slang Singers but then the proper name Bangkok, whereas another would say Singapore & Honkers et cetera. It's as if the author just couldn't decide whether to use slang terms or not and the resulting impression is that of bad writing.

Following up on the bad slang usage there was the authors inability to decide what to call the Australian Secret Intelligence Service throughout the book it is referred to as ASIS, Australian SIS, Aussie SIS and The Firm. Once again, all interchangeably with some sentences & paragraphs using two different terms.

In one section of the book a bank called Banque Nationale is mentioned, then the following sentence refers to an organisation called BNP. If someone didn't know BNP is the abbreviation for Banque Nationale de Paris they might be confused as to what is going on and what the sudden BNP abbreviation refers too. I also couldn't help but think Banque Nationale de Paris merged with Banque de Paris et des Pays-Bas (Paribis) in 2000 and became BNP Paribis; this book was written/set in 2011 more than a decade after the merger so asides from confusing abbreviation usage, it's also using the wrong name of the bank.

In addition to the above, there is also technical errors in the book. Such as in one scene a character raises his shirt to reveal a Desert Eagle pistol, then reaches down and pulls out his Browning pistol. The Desert Eagle is made by Magnum Research, Browning makes the Hi-Power these are two completely different pistols - if you're going to write a book involving guns one should at least know the type of gun one of their primary characters is using, or just refer to the thing by it's name, or brand, not try to be fancy and use both, especially when you have it wrong.

Even if you can put up with all that, the story really was just boring, unrealistic and not worth reading.
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HenriMoreaux | 1 altra recensione | Mar 30, 2013 |
When it comes to writing military intelligence, covert operation styled thrillers there have been some particularly well known authors over the years. Tom Clancy, Robert Ludlum, Ian Fleming and Len Deighton come to mind immediately. Until Mark Abernethy created Alan (Mac) McQueen, there have been fewer options to choose from set in this part of the world, seen from an Australian perspective. Mac is our super-spy, the covert operative who knows everyone, works in our geographical region, is fearless in pursuit of the goal of whatever operation he's sent on, and frighteningly able to land himself in extremely deep water at just about every outing.

COUNTER ATTACK finds him dispatched to Singapore to oversee just such a covert mission. Which goes pear-shaped. Which takes Mac from there to Saigon, and onto the former killing fields of Cambodia, all the while dodging the bad guys, and the good guys (they are somehow interchangeable yet again). Along the way he meets up with new allies, some old compatriots and uses every ounce of his nous, guile, guts and glory to avoid yet another world-wide crisis.

The fourth in the Alan McQueen series, these books are exactly what the covers are trying to tell potential readers. Big action, loud explosions, much rushing about, Mac-jep (well everyone-jep really), adrenaline fuelled, maniacal action, badder than bad baddies and a resolution by the skin of the world's teeth. We're talking thrillers here - we're definitely not talking nuanced and considered psychological analysis, although Mac isn't just an Energiser Bunny about everything. He has a wife, children, people he cares about, people he feels guilty about, people who can make him doubt himself, feel responsible. He is, however, refreshingly bullet-proof for a man of his age.

Aside from the character of Mac who is not just a man's man, he's dangerously close to a bit of a SNAG sometimes, part of the attraction of these books is that the action does take place in our region. The settings are moving around from book to book, throughout Asia, backwards and forwards out of Canberra - the politics, the military, the relationships with our immediate neighbours are woven into the action in the books in what feels like a a very realistic manner. There's a fair bit of tongue in cheek dialogue along the way, as well as quite a bit of blokey talk which personally I found quite realistic, but which could provide an unexpected tone for anybody who thinks that Australian's under pressure are all going to sound like Crocodile Dundee....

I've always been a fan of the Mac series. Whilst they are exactly what they promise to be - big, bold, loud, mad, bad and slightly out of control, there's a little bit more than that. There are some nice little human touches, there's more than just Mac in the character line up and then there's the localised settings which are the icing on the cake. Even with the reoccurring character set, you wouldn't have to have read the earlier books in the series to dive into COUNTER ATTACK. But summer's on the way and these are perfect lazy summer day reads - so why not catch up with Mac in the earlier books and really get an idea of where he's coming from?
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austcrimefiction | 1 altra recensione | Oct 27, 2011 |
I really really really hope that, in particular, local fans of spy and espionage thrillers are reading Mark Abernethy's terrific series. Firstly because each of the stories is set in our own region, and secondly because Alan McQueen is such a quintessential Aussie bloke hero type.

Of course, just setting books in our region or taking current day events as a basis for your books doesn't qualify them as must reads. What does that for DOUBLE BACK and the earlier books in the series is that they are extremely good layered high-action thrillers.

Part of the attraction of the books is Alan 'Mac' McQueen who is just about bullet-proof, but with a heart and human foibles. He's the sort of bloke that would appeal to men and women equally - fearless but not stupid about it, caring but not woosy about it, loyal but not in the face of upper echelon idiocy, Mac is an extremely good central character to weave the plots around. What also works is the settings and timeframes into which Abernethy drops MacQueen. In the case of DOUBLE BACK we are deep into the time leading up to the Indonesians being forced out of Timor. What's particularly scary is that you really have to hope that the scenario the author builds is purely fictional as it's chillingly realistic and frighteningly brutal.

But this is a military style thriller, so there is a lot of rushing about, a commensurate amount of sneaking about, and a lot of shooting and shouting. There are some great bit players in the cast - and there's some very realistic and quite funny dialogue amongst them all. Because this is such a good thriller there is also quite a good sense of place - the jungles of East Timor are dark, dangerous and damp. The towns and cities littered with sinister types with an oversupply of sunglasses.

DOUBLE BACK really is a terrific thriller - fast paced, with a good and very realistic plot. The sense of menace is particularly poignant knowing the history of the East Timorese struggle against the Indonesian army, and the scenario that Abernethy builds into the plot is particularly chilling. Having only recently gotten hold of DOUBLE BACK I was particularly pleased to see that the next book in the series COUNTER ATTACK was released in January 2010. Excellent!
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